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Jun. 7th, 2006 | 09:04 am
location: C1 - music class
mood: content content

Just a draft post, I'll fix it back when I get home. Below is a random drabble I wrote in maths and fixed up in music.

Title: Don't leave
Characters: There is shipping though it doesn't specify. It's up to you to decide. The only criteria is that it must be between a "light" woman and a "dark" man from Harry Potter.
Words: 100 exactly (YAY! So proud of myself!)
Disclaimer: Courtesy of JKR
Rating: PG

“Don’t leave.”

A pleading message hung in the silent air.

A woman stopped in her tracks and turned her head, hair falling softly on her bare shoulder.

Tenderly, almost regretfully, she whispered,”It’s the best for both of us. We’re from different sides. It just cannot be. If I leave now, it would be easier for both of us.”

Pleading, he mumbled, “We’ll run away. I love you.”

“You know I can’t hide.”

And with a last smile at her lover, she walked out of the door, out of his life.

No one saw the lone tear trailing down her face.


Like it? Hate it? PLease tell me coz it matters.

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Chris of the Fangirls

From: alltruth
Date: Jun. 7th, 2006 12:29 am (UTC)
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Oh my gosh, that's so sweet. So depressing, but oh so lovely.

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undying_love33

From: undying_love33
Date: Jun. 7th, 2006 05:49 am (UTC)
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Thank you!!!! So nice of you....is it really that depressing?

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Chris of the Fangirls

From: alltruth
Date: Jun. 7th, 2006 08:29 pm (UTC)
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Only if you over think it, which I always happen to do.

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dream_girl92

From: dream_girl92
Date: Jun. 7th, 2006 06:32 am (UTC)
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Intriguing, not bad. i should try drabble some time. Though mind u music class?! *skakes head* when will you people learn. You and Kissie are one pf a kind. At least, that's what the entire human race is hoping. Mwa Mwa.

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undying_love33

From: undying_love33
Date: Jun. 7th, 2006 11:13 am (UTC)
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Music class sux. I may like music, but put my teacher anywhere near it and it becomes stupid. Besides, I had finished all my work and I had spare time.

"You and Kissie are one pf a kind. At least, that's what the entire human race is hoping." Uhh...didn't really get that sentence (or two). What does pf mean? Also Kissie is spelt Kissy. Why? Because I made up the name and secondly I said so. Mwa

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Chris of the Fangirls

From: alltruth
Date: Jun. 7th, 2006 08:31 pm (UTC)
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I think the type that read/write fanfic in class.

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dream_girl92

From: dream_girl92
Date: Jun. 9th, 2006 07:00 am (UTC)
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right, i would of thought you were intelligent enough to a t least pic up that pf was a typo and is actually of,but apparently not. Secondly fine, i accept Kissy. Third, the entire human race is hoping you and Kissy are one of a kind cos we definitely dont want anyone else like you. Mwa Mwa!

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undying_love33

From: undying_love33
Date: Jun. 9th, 2006 11:50 am (UTC)
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Fine! Be that way!

Firstly, I was having a rather blonde moment (and day) thank you very much so I did not pick out your typo.

And secondly, people like me are hard to come by because me and Kissy are so talented in everything and it would be unfair to hurt the world's ego with more of us. So there. Mwa!

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dream_girl92

From: dream_girl92
Date: Jun. 10th, 2006 12:57 am (UTC)
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right then u want to take this outside?
lol, nice comeback i must admit, even if its nowhere close to truth, so...
lol, anyway we all know ur a crunchie, dark on the outside, blonde on the indide. lol
Haaaaa, in a sec im going to be lying on the floor laughing my head off.

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pumpkinluvr101

From: pumpkinluvr101
Date: Jun. 7th, 2006 07:19 am (UTC)
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Obviously Draco and Ginny - right? Or wrong?
Anyways Music class? And Maths? You should know better! I mean reading fanfiction during class is fine but writing it? You'll be caught one day you little rule-breaker!

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undying_love33

From: undying_love33
Date: Jun. 7th, 2006 11:11 am (UTC)
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I told you it could be any pairing. Not necessarily Draco/ginny. I'll givce an example of other pairings. SSHG, SSGW, SSLE, DMHG, DMGW. Please feel free to add.

Just to let you know, reading is much worse than writing. When reading it is obvious that you are reading somethign duw to the prettiness of the page. But when writing, I;m on word so its harder for a teacher to figure out if I'm writing fanfiction or doing a task. Which I would have already finished before starting writing just to let you know.

Hey...you didn't van say if you liked it or not! Hmph! (I don't mind if you say you hate it)

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Chris of the Fangirls

From: alltruth
Date: Jun. 7th, 2006 08:30 pm (UTC)
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Ellie!! When you highlight you icon half is red and the other is blue!!!!

just thought i should tell you....

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pumpkinluvr101

From: pumpkinluvr101
Date: Jun. 9th, 2006 09:45 am (UTC)
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You mean this icon??? Seems fine to me...

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undying_love33

From: undying_love33
Date: Jun. 9th, 2006 11:51 am (UTC)
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I thought so too...but Kissy has always been rather "special'.

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